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++ COMMISION ++ Jean-Luc St Laurence by alexzappa ++ COMMISION ++ Jean-Luc St Laurence by alexzappa
commission for :iconstarryowleyes: her OC Jan-Luc.

Finally done! I really hope you like him my dear :)

thank you for commissioning me and for your patience :hug:
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:iconxxpuddingcupxx:
Alright when first looking at the piece it seems very stunning. The person seems to just draw your eyes to it. The hair is simply amazing with the flopped look of unruly waves that curl at the tips. The gloss you add to the hair gives it more animation. With his face the look you give them is very serious to me yet its bored almost as if they are looking for something and they have no interest to anything else but the object of their desire. To the clothes I see that they are very detailed in there shading each piece fits the man perfectly. The shirt shows that it is very loose and thin while the jacket can be seen as thick and solid and the inside is deliciously red. The under tones given to it show the fabric is thick yet flows but only in harsher wind. The pants are nice and match his clothing well and matches the other articles. For vision i feel it was executed very well it seems that you got what you wanted . Originality i feel is there but i feel that the man standing alone is used alot but what gives it the originality for me is the eyes and the body language. Technique is beyond amazing I can tell you take time and pride in your work. Impact is also high I feel that this was not only inspiring to me it gives me a story to your art.
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:iconvalentine2442:
Valentine2442 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015
The Best !
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:iconjustice-jack:
Justice-Jack Featured By Owner Edited Jun 25, 2015
This is InCreDiBle  Clap
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:iconcecepeniston:
CecePeniston Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
"Jean-Luc St Laurence" :icontsukinosmirkplz: Such a great for an OC!
Anyway it's wonderful!
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:iconswirlyeyeshypnotize:
SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice! :heart:
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:iconiaredleto:
iaredleto Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
Beautiful!!!))
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:iconobscuresanctuary:
ObscureSanctuary Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
I love the billowing hair and coat. It's very dramatic
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:iconparanoidschizoangel:
ParanoidSchizoAngel Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is beautiful!
<3
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:iconmangaworm2u:
mangaworm2u Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
Very Beautiful and well put together. I love the dramatic coloring against the other monochromatic colors; it really tells a lot about the character.
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:icongingerhighlandergirl:
gingerhighlandergirl Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:drool:
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:iconiskrypelis:
Iskrypelis Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
That is so gorgeous!!! Love everything :) Amazing work :clap:
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:iconneko-baka-olush:
Neko-Baka-Olush Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
Omg,awesome! He have so much hair and so beautiful bodyd ;; A ;; Do you know,that I love you? - I meant I love your style of course :D
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:iconvondiezyl:
VonDiezyl Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He's beautiful *O*
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:iconmoistvon-lipwig:
MoistVon-Lipwig Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
Ale ciacho...wymiatasz z tym swoim stylem aż do nieba i dalej ;)
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:iconkryseis-art:
Kryseis-Art Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your beautiful work is featured here : [link]
:glomp: :love:
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:iconlotusbitch:
Lotusbitch Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
I like how you put the attention on the man's wavy hair with the open shirt and leather jacket with the red inside. Really gives that sexy and carefree somber feeling. Also love those red tint lips :love:
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :) I'm happy you like it :D
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:iconbrammovich:
brammovich Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Do you color these with a program or with real materials?
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Photoshop and Sai - no traditional media ;)
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:iconbrammovich:
brammovich Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ok thx!! ^^
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:icononi-vega:
Oni-Vega Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow *_*
I like the foggy shadow over the picture. And Jean-Luc :love:
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:D
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:iconfluffys-inu:
fluffys-inu Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
So beautiful! I love how it looks like you've caught a snapshot of him, like he's passing by and BAM.
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:iconscarlettafruits:
scarlettafruits Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
pardon me but HOLY SHIET :heart: This looks fantastic! Rough character and piece with a soft touch finish to it! I love it!
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you ^^ I'm glad you like it :D
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:iconmannybat69:
MannyBat69 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013   General Artist
Hot. Im glad I read the critique cause then I took a real good look at his face and it is original. I noticed that if you cut out the body the dude looks like a lady did you do that on purpose, what made you use that head, did you get a base from something else, and what tools did you use for this.
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
almost all of my mens have femminile faces ;) It's my trademark.
And yep I used ref fore this one, but only for base of the coat ;)
And tools hmmm... It's a hard question I used many tools, basically I work on Paint Tool Sai and Photoshop - using all pencils and effects I know xD
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:iconcolumbine15nz:
COLUMBINE15NZ Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
He is certainly a very beautiful man. You should be very very proud. :+favlove:
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :tighthug:
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:iconcolumbine15nz:
COLUMBINE15NZ Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug: You're very welcome!
I actually got quite a shock when I saw him. He looks frighteningly similar to my OC.
It's...complicated.
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:iconcaim-the-order:
Caim-The-Order Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
oh my god he looks soooOOOOo gorgeous!!! :faint:
those cheekbones and lips~~ :horny:
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:heart:
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:iconundead-academy:
Undead-Academy Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
He is gorgeous , great work :)
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:iconpookystar:
Pookystar Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist
He looks gorgeous! I love the textures of his clothing and the hair.
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:iconanielaabair:
AnielaAbair Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It looks amazing. Great job.
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:iconmizzqueen:
MizzQueen Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
OMG great picture!! :D
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:iconsharon-darc:
Sharon-dArc Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Omg *.* genialne. Najlepiej (po za kolorami) moim zdaniem wyszła dynamika ruchu tj. włosy, płaszcz, krzyżyk... no i sama postawa XD Ale i tak najbardziej podoba mi się wzorek na spodniach i pasie. Wyszło takie realistyczne ^^
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
cieszę się, ze tak uważasz :D Troche pracy mnie kosztował ten arcik, zeby wyglądał tak jak wygląda ^^
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:iconeli-luminescent:
Eli-Luminescent Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Handsome alert :heart:
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:iconkkohaku:
Kkohaku Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Podoba mi się pomysł na ujęcie postaci, jest jakaś dynamika, ruch. I te Twoje kolorki :D Udana praca :heart:
Hmm... a on nie ma nieco za małego głowy?O_O bo taki kark wydaje się szeroki xD
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
też jestem z tego "dynamizmu" całkiem zadowolona... ale jak zwykle nie do końca, bo spodziewałam się, ze wyjdzie lepiej xD
z kolorami miałam spory problem więc troche było kombinowania, żeby wyglądało klimatowo...
w ogole on jest troche nie proporcjonalny xD ale ciii.....
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:iconkkohaku:
Kkohaku Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Wiesz, myślę, że wyrabiasz normę i mieścisz się w pracach "pięknych" ;D no ale jak sięgasz w stronę "idealnych" to trzymam kciuki :D Swoją drogą, czasami aż wypada, aby powzdychać nad swoją pracą :D
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:icontheycanseeinthedark:
TheyCanSeeIntheDark Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Wonderful!!!
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much!
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:icontheycanseeinthedark:
TheyCanSeeIntheDark Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Your welcome! :)
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:iconseasoncall:
seasoncall Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So sexy!! You did an excellent work, this is absolutely awesome :D
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :) I did my best :D
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:iconseasoncall:
seasoncall Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome ^^
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:iconxxpuddingcupxx:
xXPUDDINGCUPXx Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Student General Artist
love the piece. Also hope you like the critique
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:iconalexzappa:
alexzappa Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:heart: critique is amazing, when I read it I fell lot of motivation, so thank you soooo much!
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:iconxxpuddingcupxx:
xXPUDDINGCUPXx Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Student General Artist
well I'm glad you liked it. your piece motivates me to i mean i was happy to critique your work. how long it take
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